Sirius Black in tank top

I’m surprised at how much my watercolor skill deteriorates (even though it wasn’t good in the beginning anyways).

Sirius doesn’t look very manly here. Is it because of the right eye being too big? Or is it because of the mouth being too small? Or is it the eye brow? Somebody please give me some hints. I can’t spot the problem.

What’s worse is that I wasn’t able to portray his aristocratic beauty and elegance in this piece of fanart. Let’s face it: he looks like one of those models that appear at the packages of some man’s underwear. (sigh x2)

Despite my unsuccessful attempt, I totally enjoyed the process of drawing my beloved Sirius. I bet Remus would have drawn him better, though.